The Phoenix – Character Bio

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The Phoenix –  Birth

 

When she walks into the room, all heads turn.  Her glimmering ruby hair sprinkled with iridescent golden streaks, and starlight white and purple highlights, her crystal ocean blue eyes accented by a hint of matching glitter, by long and thick black eyelashes, her ivory translucent skin, highlighted by the slightest tint of cinnamon cheeks and luscious velvety burgundy lips make her a stand out.

 

Her clothes are just as eclectic.  No outfit is ever the same and each one is more colorful than the one before.  There is always a metallic, shimmering to what she wears.  The sleeves of her robes are long and wide, like an eagle’s wings echoing their colorful expanse.  She does not frequent any renowned designer.  Where her clothes come from is just as mysterious as she is.

 

She is never seen anywhere before her services are needed and won’t be seen again unless they are completed.  She cannot be summoned.  Her exploits are known only to those whom she has helped, and they are then sworn to secrecy.  If you see her, it is because someone is in need. Every once in a while, though, for her personal curiosity, she may appear at an event she considers intriguing.

 

You cannot reach her.  She comes to you.  How does she do this?  Only she knows.

 

Her mind and psychic abilities outshine anyone else and are another mystery.  She does not belong to groups of psychics, soothsayers, or any other such ilk of personages.  Her ocean-blue eyes see everything and everyone and aid her in how she chooses her next client.  One does not merely seek her out-she will seek you out when your situation warrants it.

 

So how does she do it?  She meditates and looks at her magic crystals, her Tarot cards (though she does this just for fun and doesn’t put much stock in them-they merely provide a possible path) and any other spiritual tools she has accumulated through her numerous years and voyages throughout Earth (and perhaps other planets?).  She sees many interesting or fetching revelations, but only the most helpful capture her attention.  Once her mission is considered an intricate part of someone’s destiny, she will contact that individual.  She will just appear wherever that client might be. Whether she decides then to select that client depends on many factors and there is never the same set of circumstances to catch to her attention. The rules vary from case to case.

 

She is often thought to be other worldly.  Her powers are rumored to be supernatural and that is the reason she is called, “The Phoenix.”  The Phoenix, being born and born again of dangerous events, will always resurface.

 

Comments Please

I am looking for substantial and constructive comments on my recent posts of the first two chapters of my published book, As Long As You Believe.  I am interested in knowing if people are desirous of reading more of this book.  I realize there are only two chapters, but this is a time consuming project, posting it chapter by chapter, and I am curious if anyone is reading them or is interested in reading more.

I have started a new book, The Phoenix, and also wanted to post just the opening description of the main character for comments.

Please let me know what you think.  Thanks.  Patricia

Looking for Comments – New Character

 

The Phoenix –  Birth

 

When she walks into the room, all heads turn.  Her glimmering ruby hair sprinkled with iridescent golden streaks, and starlight white and purple highlights, her crystal ocean blue eyes accented by a hint of matching glitter, by long and thick black eyelashes, her ivory translucent skin, highlighted by the slightest of cinnamon cheeks and luscious velvety burgundy lips make her a stand out.

 

Her clothes are just as eclectic.  No outfit is ever the same and each one is more colorful than the one before.  There is always a metallic, shimmering to what she wears.  The sleeves of her robes are long and wide, like an eagle’s wings echoing their colorful expanse.  She does not frequent any renowned designer.  Where her clothes come from is just as mysterious as she is.

 

She is never seen anywhere before her services are needed and won’t be seen again unless they are completed.  She cannot be summoned.  Her exploits are known only to those whom she has helped, and they are then sworn to secrecy.  If you see her, it is because someone is in need. Every once in a while, though, for her personal curiosity, she may appear at an event she considers intriguing.

 

You cannot reach her.  She comes to you.  How does she do this?  Only she knows.

 

Her mind and psychic abilities outshine anyone else and are a another mystery.  She does not belong to groups of psychics, soothsayers, or any other such ilk of personages.  Her ocean-blue eyes see everything and everyone and aid her in how she chooses her next client.  One does not merely seek her out-she will seek you out when your situation warrants it.

 

So how does she do it?  She meditates and looks at her magic crystals, her Tarot cards (though she does this just for fun and doesn’t put much stock in them-they merely provide a possible path) and any other spiritual tools she has accumulated through her numerous years and voyages throughout Earth (and perhaps other planets?).  She sees many interesting or fetching revelations, but only the most helpful capture her attention.  Once her mission is considered an intricate part of someone’s destiny, she will contact that individual.  She will just appear wherever her client might be. Whether she decides then to select her client depends on many factors and there is never the same set of circumstances to catch to her attention. The rules vary from case to case.

 

She is often thought to be other worldly.  Her powers are rumored to be supernatural and that is the reason she is called, “The Phoenix.”  The Phoenix, being born and born again of dangerous events, will always resurface.

 

Chapter 2 – The Inheritance

 

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Winchester was transported to Mestoya, a colony inhabited by several tribes of primitive creatures from another civilization. His mission was to turn them into devoted worshippers and followers of Grantook, his evil ways and, therefore, the weight of his proposed successor, Winchester. A condition of this ultimate test was that Winchester was to be on his own; there would be no more help from the Great Grantook.

 

It wasn’t long before word of Winchester’s success soon reached the dying wizard who was finally beginning to feel he could die without worrying about the future of The Order. As a reward for a job well done, Winchester asked that he be allowed to bring back two of Mestoya’s inhabitants. They would serve as his own helpers, assisting in any way Winchester saw fit. Naturally, Grantook granted the request and so the Mestoyan twins Barog and Tarow accompanied Winchester back to Karah.

 

After Winchester’s return, he and Grantook spoke at great length about the future. It was during one such conversation that the great wizard suddenly turned a dastardly shade of green and started sweating profusely.

 

“Almighty Grantook, what is it?” Winchester’s voice trembled with fear.

 

“It’s time,” Grantook sputtered. “Oh no, I can’t leave yet, I haven’t told you about the ring!”

 

Grantook held up his swollen purple hand, the call of death forcing each and every vein to throb and pulse erratically.

 

“The ring? What ring?” Winchester asked, the usual look of perplexity on his drawn face.

 

In a weakened rush, Grantook struggled to remove it from his swollen middle finger. As he did so, the golden band engraved with secret symbols representing some of The Order’s most secret spells glinted and sparkled. The huge reddish purple stone cushion in the golden collar chiseled with The Order’s secret signs winked at its benefactor. Giving the ring one final jerk, the knuckle cracked and off it came.

 

“Quick, put it on no! Not on that finger,” he yelled, while thinking something much more sinister, and watched Winchester try to slip it on his pinky. “It must go on the middle finger, as it has been worn since time began.  Quick give me your hand. No, not that one, the one with the ring on it now.”

 

Grantook shook his head and sighed deeply. In approaching his death, he realized his choice may have been too hasty.

 

“I do hope I have done the right thing,” he thought, fading quickly.

 

Holding Winchester’s hands, he mumbled several words and then clapped his hand sharply against that of his protégé.

 

“The spell of passage is complete. Now you have the powers you will need to survive against the goodness of this universe.”

 

The ring began to glow and a greenish tint painted the drab walls of the similarly nauseatingly-colored cavern.

 

“Hey,” Winchester whined, “the ring is burning my finger!”

 

“Good. That means it has accepted you. Now, all you have to do is live up to what is expected of you.”

 

Drops of thick and bubbly orange gray saliva slid from Grantook’s mouth, down his chin and onto his robes. Seconds later, his body disintegrated into a dark powdery dust, the particles pulling together, swirling round and round, finally forming a small cloud that darted out the window like a whizzing bullet. Sitting on the ground, all in a heap, was his brocaded robe, All that remained of Grantook, was, of course, the ring on Winchester’s hand.

 

Winchester stood there for a moment and then picked up the pointed wizard’s hat and put it on. He contemplated his new powers.

 

“No sense wasting time,” he grinned, adjusting the rim and rummaging through Grantook’s papers.

 

After throwing papers everywhere, Winchester stopped when he spied a brand-new Federation Map buried beneath one of the big piles of all the others.

 

“Why, this looks interesting,” he smiled slyly.

 

It was a detailed topographical map of Amoris, a newly discovered planet now under consideration for its ability to sustain habitation. Notes on the map said it had been discovered by an exploration team on its way back to the Federation after completing an interstellar survey. They had been slightly off course when they discovered the huge purple sphere sitting out in the middle of nowhere.

 

Pink mist and cotton candy clouds, lavender seas and magenta mountains; all appeared compatible for life as they knew it. With the great shortage of such planets these days, it definitely warranted further investigation. The notes continued, saying that upon the team’s return and report, a colonization unit had been sent out to study its potential to support life. It was this discovery of that map which led to Winchester’s first visit to the purple planet.

 

With great enthusiasm, Winchester activated the viewer in Grantook’s cavern, in order to have a better idea of the planet’s terrain and scanning for the whereabouts of the recent settlement. There was no actual date of the colonists’ arrival on the notes and he had no idea of when the team had arrived or even if any member had remained behind or even survived. After studying the silvery screen for a few minutes, he spotted random signs of life. Several dwellings were set several miles inland from a range of magnificent purple mountains, close to a forest of big blue trees. In the other direction, although barely audible through the viewer, Winchester could hear the soft lapping of lilac painted waves rushing to shore.

 

“Excellent, I love it already,” he laughed, his lips pulled back in a tight smile. “Now,” he turned and looked at his assistants Barog and Tarow, “let’s go get a better look… At our new home.”

 

This is installment 2 of As Long As You Believe, published in 1997. ISBN: 0-9657084-0-3 and on file with the Library of Congress.  Special signed collector’ editions are available from the author.

As Long As You Believe – Chapter 1 – The Apprentice

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Furious swirling mists of toxic yellow and orange gasses form and reform small vortexes everywhere on the surface of the planet Pariah.  The wind howls out in terror in and perilous pain as the planet’s skin is scarred and pitted with the help of passing space debris from past and present civilizations. It is easy to think that  life cannot exist above the inner core of this planet.

Thousands of feet below, however, there lies a small city. High above, it is tainted with the noxious fumes of the atmosphere, but down below it is warmed by tendrils of excruciating heat clawing deep below its surface. It is part of a deep dark secret known only to those whose job it is to enforce the laws of unacceptable behavior and conduct. Within the bloated bowels of Pariah, so they had named it,  the Federation has converted an abandoned relay station into a honeycomb of maximum detention cells for intergalactic criminals as one of its responsibilities to eradicate all criminal behavior throughout each galaxy.

Detained many lifetimes ago in one such cell was a wizard, whose name continues to bring fear into the most courageous of hearts. He is Winchester the Wicked. His sentence on Pariah was life, a very long time for any wizard, but especially unbearable for one as evil as Winchester.

Confined in his tiny cubicle and with plenty of time to think, he has paced impatiently back and forth, wearing a rut in the concrete, unwillingly remembering the events that put him on Pariah. None the less, unrepentant, he is all the more infuriated by each passing day of his imprisonment that can only be terminated by his death.

What is really unusual about this particular prisoner is that he had always been so evil. There had been, in fact, a time many eons ago when all his attempted magic had been quite harmless… Well, almost.

As a young man growing up on Karah, Winchester suffered greatly among his peers, his appearance being what it was. Even way back then, his excessive height had been a problem, not to mention his extreme thinness. A good gust of wind was more than enough to force him to grab on to some nearby objects to keep from being blown over… or just blown away.

He had an oversized nose which came to a distinctive point, very much like the long yellow beak of a crow. His eyes were narrow and dark. They squinted a great deal of the time and not because he needed visual enhancements, commonly known as VE’s. His skin was pale, with a sickly gray tinge and after the slightest exertion, buckets of sweat would stream down his lean body. Greasy strings of coal black hair, when struck by the suns rays, gave off a royal blue aura much like the Northern lights above the Alaskan sky on the old Earth. Time, endurance and the inability to change what he could not, taught him to accept his rather unusual looks. There was only one way for him to gain self-esteem he would focus his attention on becoming a true wizard.

As a wizard’s apprentice, however, he was anything but successful. No matter how much he applied himself, his spells were insipid; they had no fizzle, no sparks, they were actually rather, well, boring. The only thing they ever did accomplish, granted though accidentally, was to change lower grade schoolmates who were constantly taunting him, into strange, or perhaps stranger, beings. Although the changes often turned out to be temporary, there was a rather unpleasant and embarrassing side effect, such as causing them to lose their hair or do strange things until the spell eventually wore off completely.

At the same time, while many people did not know of the existence of the Great Grantook (the wizard to who established the clan to which Winchester aspired to join), he had made it his business to learn more about Winchester and for a very unsavory reason. Those who practice this branch of magic outlawed by the Federation, looked up to Grantook as their dark leader, as their sacred wizard. Grantook had lived for many more years in the planet Karh itself, having teleported there when he was but a young budding terror but even for him ,life as he knew it was coming to an end. He was searching for a successor.

News of Winchester’s inability to perfect or perform spells and other bits and pieces of the Federation endorsed magic had filtered down into the cave’s Grantook inhabited, from his many undercover apprentices who still lived on the surface.

“I wonder if this boy is following the wrong calling. Could it be his potential is misdirected?” Grantook speculated to one of his bidders. “Channel him here at once,” he ordered, “so I can have a look at this, this oh, just bring him here!”

For all that he wasn’t, Winchester had always been rather naïve while someone else might have asked who this Grantook was and why did he live below the surface level of Karah, Winchester merely nodded to the small man and endeavored to keep up with his quick pace, never once questioning his final destination nor its purpose. He displayed a child’s innocence when at last he found himself deep within the Karah’s guts, having been conducted through a maze of dimly lighted passageways and the channeling beam. The messenger paused in a huge cavern punctured with hundreds of long dark tunnels, each one seemingly without end.

The ceiling was high, so high Winchester could not see its top. This cell was well lighted and after he had looked all around, trying not to get dizzy from the immensity of it all, he heard a cough and looked back down. There, astride an antique chaise lounge covered with a spring garden of hand-painted delicate pastel flowers, was a being.

He wore a tall pointed hat, as was the fashion for wizards in most orders. He was dressed in an ornate robe woven from all the colors of the rainbow – – combinations of blues and reds and greens held together by threads of silver and gold, all covering his immenseness.As tall as Winchester was, this being was short. As narrow as Winchester was, this being was wide. But his face was what Winchester finally came to focus upon. It was round. Very round. Except for the usual facial features – – a pug nose, two round eyes and a mouth which disappeared into the folds of several chins, it was difficult to tell the difference between it and one of those Graffi balls his peers tossed back and forth when they were in between courses (Graffi had always been too strenuous for Winchester, who was a rather delicate child, and who had been forced to spend many hours watching others play.) And then the being spoke.

A loud bellow issued from between large purple lips and the huge being wasted no time in quizzing and questioning Winchester. He put him through several apprentice tests until he was quite satisfied with the preliminary results which included the inadvertent blowing up of one of the most modern and newly constructed laboratories ever built below a planet’s surface. The Great Grantook had not intended this to be part of the task, but time was running out.

“I don’t really have a choice now, do I,” he mumbles half heartedly. “I will have to work with this one. All the others have been disposed of, for one reason or another, or have succeeded in disposing of themselves. I don’t have the time to find another candidate. I will just give him as much help as I can until the end and, I will give him the ring.”

Right before Grantook’s demise, Winchester was scheduled to undergo the ultimate test. If he passed, he would receive the official title of Wizard. If he didn’t, well, he would join those before him who had failed.