I am looking for substantial and constructive comments on my recent posts of the first two chapters of my published book, As Long As You Believe. I am interested in knowing if people are desirous of reading more of this book. I realize there are only two chapters, but this is a time consuming project, posting it chapter by chapter, and I am curious if anyone is reading them or is interested in reading more.
I have started a new book, The Phoenix, and also wanted to post just the opening description of the main character for comments.
Please let me know what you think. Thanks. Patricia